(FightWrite’s Find the Flaw)

I have two favorite Bobs. I met both at writer’s conferences this year, and both carry the last name [stahyn]. I write that phonetically as each one spells it a little different. I also point it all out because what are the odds of that? Two Bob [stahyn]s met at conferences?

One of the Bobs is Bob Eckstein. We met at the WD conference. He is a brilliant artist, funny writer, wonderful walking buddy, and an all-around delight of a human. My other favorite Bob is Bob Stine who I met at Thrillerfest. You might know him better as R.L. Stine.

If you have never seen Bob “R. L.” Stine in an interview or heard him speak, it would be easy to imagine him as, well, creepy. He writes books about killer dolls, haunted houses, werewolves, cursed masks. Heck, he has a whole book series known as Fear Street. If the subject is spine-tingling enough keep you up at night both reading and fearing sleep, Bob Stine has probably written on it.

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Before the conference began, I asked my co-teacher, Jason Allison, which sessions he would suggest I attend. Jason and I taught a class on fight scenes together and he’s a Thrillerfest vet. He has heard many authors speak and could quickly scan the schedule and point out some of his favorites, one of which was R. L. Stine.

“Go to Bob’s. Super nice man. You’ll like him a lot. He’s kind of…” Jason thought then shrugged and said, “He’s kind of cuddly.” 

Cuddly? Writers, Jason is a former ATF agent and looks the part. He’s tall and imposing. Cuddly isn’t a word you’d imagine him saying at all must less as an adjective for a horror writer.

Eight rows back from the stage on which R. L. Stine was being interviewed, I had to agree. Bob Stine is, in fact, kind of cuddly. His resting expression is a smile. He laughs easy and jokes quite a bit. He’s very endearing and makes you feel like you know him. He’s kind of like a sweet neighbor who bakes you some cookies then jokes that his cooking has never killed anyone because he is always sure to pull its teeth out before he serves it. Then he walks home and writes a book about a cookie that eats people and it sells one billion copies because it is that good. Your kids read it twice. That’s Bob Stine.

During his session, Bob gave several pieces of writing advice, all of which were very practical. The one that stuck with me is one that I have never heard any other decorated author say. Scoot closer to your screen. You’re going to want to remember this.

Bob Stine pointed his thumb toward the door and said that if you go to a writing class and the teacher talks about how hard writing is, get up and leave. Writing is not hard. It’s just not.

He went on to explain that if we get into our heads that writing is hard, then every time we sit down to write, it will be hard. We have to look at it as easy and enjoyable so it will be. Does that mean it won’t be tough sometimes? No. It does mean that it won’t be tough because we have it in our heads that’s how it is.

Wow. Mic drop.

Writers, our brains do not believe what is true. Our brains believe what we tell it. If we constantly tell our brain that something is hard to accomplish, we will be right. That is not because what we have told our brain is true and the task is difficult. We will be right because our brains will approach the task with the notion that what lies ahead is hard, prepare to struggle, prepare to survive. Yes, when we say writing is hard, we prime our brains to survive rather than create. That’s not me being dramatic. It’s science.

Our brains are wired for efficiency to reduce energy consumption. Our brains burn an estimated 20 percent of our caloric intake.  A three-pound mass, 60 percent of which is fat, burns 20 of every 100 calories that you eat. Now, imagine that you are one of ancient ancestors who hunted or gathered in order to put calories on the table. Our brains have known from the start that it had to have a certain economy, or it would consume calories the rest of our body needediii.

That caloric economy is why our brains try to be as lazy as possible. When we push our brains toward something that we tell it will be difficult, our brains try to avoid it because a difficult task means more calorie consumption. That one word, hard, puts your brain on the defensive and a path to avoidance. What you think is laziness, lack of motivation or weak willpower might be your brain doing what it was constructed to do: conserve fuel and survive.

Now, full disclosure, this is a full-stop, “physician heal thyself” moment. I tell myself that writing is hard. I have primed my brain to see the process as a task to be avoided. And, I do. I avoid it, then I beat myself up for it which makes me feel like a loser which puts me in a bad place mentally, defeated before I even begin, which yields not great writing which makes me feel like a whole other kind of loser who needs some chips or chocolate and a few seasons of “The Great British Baking Show” and, wouldn’t you know it, I’m back to not writing.

How do I get past that cycle? I write. I write crappy, defeated work and I do it every day if I can. Even if it’s just a few uninspired sentences, by golly, I do it. Because after a point, this hard thing of writing will become a habit. My brain will form more pathways related to writing. Those pathways will become well-traveled and the brain loves crossing neural bridges it’s crossed many times before. Writing will no longer be perceived as something to be avoided. It will be as Bob Stine so simply put, not hard.

If you, like me, have made writing a thing that requires your brain to get up on its hind legs, ready to fight, let’s close the door on that. Because “writing is not hard.” I put that in quotes to remind you that it is not me saying it. I’m quoting none other than R. L. Stine. If you and I can start writing as if it is easy, as if it is the thing our hands are meant to do and our brain rejoices in, then it actually will be. Challenging? Sure. But easy all the same. 

And that, dear writers, is enough to give me goosebumps.

Until the next round with FightWrite on the WD blog, may you have a blessed holiday and write well.

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(Broken Nose Symptoms for Writers (FightWrite))

Spot the Problem

The Spot the Problem puzzle was a coloring book style picture in which there were cleverly hidden items that didn’t make sense. For example, in a pumpkin patch there might be a basketball drawn amongst the gourds. Or, maybe the Thanksgiving turkey would have a sock on one leg.

Your Find the Flaw Puzzle

Your Spot the Problem puzzles are in word form. You will be hunting for flaws in short fight/action scenes. All of the blunders are related to some aspect of fighting. There will be no issues of writing such as grammar, punctuation, spelling, or even pacing or style. Just keep your focus on anything to do with fighting or fight training.

In the three scenes, there are a total of 10 flaws. Each of the 10 will be revealed at the end and briefly explained. Also, I’ve purposely made them not too violent or gory.

Ready? Good! Have a seat on some shag carpet, put on a LP record and let’s find the flaws!

The Flawed Fight Scenes

1. Minah raced across the parking lot to the boxing gym, nearly tripping over her flip-flops as she went. She was fighting for the title belt in six weeks and here she was late to warm up on her first day of training camp. It wasn’t a good look.

She grabbed her four-ounce gloves from her bag on her way in the door, then, in one swift movement, threw the duffle near the cubbies and kicked off her flip flops behind her. The slap of her bare feet on the floor echoed through the vacant gym as she ran toward the boxing ring. Thank heavens, she thought, her coach nowhere in sight.

She had barely pulled her gloves over her bare-knuckled hands before someone called out to her.

“Hey, champ!”

Minah smiled, turned, then stumbled back against the force of the woman crashing into her. The ring behind Minah caught her fall and she stayed on her feet for a moment before sliding down to sitting.

She looked down at her shirt and hands, then sat slack-jawed as her coach ran from the gym and her warm blood ran down to the floor.

2. The mugger caught up to Sarah and pushed her hard. She fell and hit the sidewalk face down with a smack. The hot, summer cement bit into her chin and the palms of her hands. Her top teeth impaled her bottom lip.

Still breathless from the fall, Sarah did her best to punch and kick the man who stood over her.

He laughed, put a knee on her back and pinned her right arm behind her. “I’ll be taking this,” he said, then snatched the diamond watch from her wrist. “Oh, and by the way,” he paused to push himself up to his feet. Sarah grunted under his weight. “Tell your mom she owes me one.”

3. The third punch knocked two teeth loose. Joe pushed against the little incisors with his tongue, then spit them out. They landed with light taps on the floor. “Those were my favorite teeth,” he said, then stuck out his bottom lip. Blood and spittle dribbled down his chin.

The giant of a man stepped forward and looked down at Joe. “You think this is some kind of joke?”

Joe wiped his mouth, then shrugged before stepping back and elbowing the man the man in the ear. The man blinked with the impact, but that was all.

“Now, that’s a prob—,” Joe started. His words choked to a wheeze as the man grabbed him by the throat. Joe gurgled, gasped and kicked as his neck took the weight of his body and his toes left the floor.

“Wait,” Joe said, his voice hissing and legs dangling. He grabbed the man’s wrist with both hands and pulled up to get a breath, not daring to let go for fear his neck would break. “I…got something…for you.”

The man narrowed his eyes in question.

Joe smiled then coughed strings of spittle. “I…I got this.”

With a grunt, Joe threw his legs up and wrapped them around the man’s neck, squeezing with every ounce of strength that he had left. Stunned, the man let go of Joe’s throat to protect his own. A minute later, the man’s knees buckled and he fell face down, unconscious. 

Joe scooted away, caught his breath, then said, “And that’s what happens when you cut in line at the coffee shop.”

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The Flaws Revealed

Scene One      

Three problems. One: Minah is using four-ounce gloves which are for MMA not adult boxing. Two: She runs barefoot to the ring. Boxers wear boxing shoes. Three: She has bare hands under his gloves. Fighters wrap their hands.

Scene Two

One problem. Sarah is pushed down and lands on her stomach yet punches and kicks at the thief. How could she punch or kick him if she is facing the ground?

Scene Three

Buckle up. These six flaws are fairly technical.

Flaw one: Because the man is so much taller than Joe, Joe wouldn’t be able to hit the man’s ear with an elbow. The highest an elbow can be thrown, without jumping, is the height of the throwers own head. I saw this exact scenario in a well-known thriller book. Loved the book. Love the writer. The elbow? Not so much.  

Two: Unless you are Darth Vader or supernatural in some way, you can’t lift a human by their neck like that and not just because the neck isn’t made to hold the body’s weight. It has to do with strength and physics. Holding even just half of one’s weight out in front of the body with one hand requires a shocking amount of strength. Even if you have the strength, physics would cause the holder’s body to tip forward. Trust me on this. I have tried it.

Three: Joe’s choking the man with his legs is problematic. To choke the man unconscious, Joe has to choke the blood supply on both sides of the man’s neck. That is why the technique is called a choke. It chokes off the blood flow to the brain. Joe could accomplish that with an arm-in or arm-out choke. Both types of technique would require Joe to pull the big man in close or at least get his knees on either side of the man’s neck which would require a good bend in the big guy’s elbow. He didn’t achieve that bend that we know of.

Four: But let’s say he did bend the man’s elbow. It wouldn’t matter because as soon as the big man let go of Joe’s neck, Joe’s upper body would drop changing the position of his legs. That would negate the angle of just about any choke he might have on the guy.

Five: The big man drops forward. Where the heck did toothless Joe go? How did the guy not fall on him?

Six: It doesn’t take a full minute to choke someone out. It’s more like 10 seconds. I doubt the big man would just let Joe grip him like an angry crawdad for a minute without fighting back successfully. A writer would have to give a good reason why the man just stands there as his consciousness slips away.

Specialized Knowledge

Most of the issues with these fight scenes go back to specialized knowledge. Whenever you have a character who has specialized knowledge in anything, be it fighting or frying chicken, you need to have enough of that specialized knowledge yourself if you mean to go in depth on the matter. If you mention that the granny is frying chicken, and that’s all you say about it, that’s fine. If you say she tosses a chicken leg into the hot oil, that’s a lack of technical knowledge. You don’t toss anything into hot oil.

When writing your fight scene, the less technical you get, the less problems you run into. Besides, readers seem to care more about what happened than how it happened. That said, you should have enough technical knowledge to make your story believable. If your MC is a boxer and you write a scene with them training, you should know they wear boxing shoes, wrap their hands and the weight of their gloves.

Resources and a Shameless Plug

How do you get specialized knowledge? You talk to someone with that knowledge. You can also buy my books or reach out to me for a mentor appointment. (You had to know that was coming.) With a little time to prep, I can talk you through just about anything to do with any type of fight scene/scenario. I can also talk you through frying chicken. 

November is an especially beautiful month here in the U.S. as it is when we celebrate Thanksgiving. As the name suggests, the holiday focuses on gratitude. I am deeply grateful for both Writer’s Digest and, you, its readers. If you need any help with your fight scene, please reach out. I truly enjoy it and am grateful for the opportunity.

Until the next round with FightWrite’ on the WD blog, thank you for simply being you.

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(Where To Carry a Weapon (FightWrite))

Nosey Bones

To better understand nose breaks, we have to understand what is actually being broken. The nasal bones are a pair of bones that form the back and the beginning of the nose. These bones extend a little less than half way down the bridge of the nose. If you run your finger along the top of your nose, you might be able to feel a little ridge where the nasal bones end.

On the sides, the nose is supported by the maxillary bone. If you run your finger down the side of your nose toward the tip, the point at which the nose gets pliable is where the maxillary bone ends. The rest of the nose is cartilage. Cartilage is a connective tissue than can exist in varying degrees of firmness. Firmer cartilage structures, such as in the bridge of the nose, can break.

What a Broken Nose Is

A broken nose occurs when any of the bones or cartilage of the nose is fractured. It is a common injury that can occur any time the nose is struck by a direct blow or fall. With enough force, the bones and cartilage can cave in.

What A Broken Nose Ain’t

A broken nose ain’t an “immediate death” button. I cannot count the number of times that I have heard someone say that if they were attacked, they would palm strike the assailant in the face and drive their nose bone into their brain. Bam! Immediate death.

While a palm strike to the nose is a fantastic self-defense technique, it’s not a lethal one. If it were, boxing would run out of fighters really fast. The nose bone is not long enough to reach the brain even if kept intact and pointed backwards. Think about any Halloween skull you have ever seen. How big was the nose on it?

Symptoms of a Broken Nose

When a nose breaks, the person may hear a crack which may or may not be audible to others. The nose may be misshaped and bleed a little or a lot. That blood may flow out of the nose onto the face and/or down the throat. (Yes, that is a thing.) We will look at that in a moment.

The nose will swell and bruise. The swelling can extend above the eyebrows and out to the cheek bones. The bruising can extend to the same areas. On my site, I have pictures of this sort of swelling and bruising. The pictures are of my friend Hope who is a pro fighter. Her injury didn’t happen during a fight. It happened, like 70 percent of fight injuries, during training. And, y’all, it’s the worst I’ve seen her nose. 

The Pain 

A broken nose also HURTS—all caps on purpose. The pressure is like a weight on the face. You don’t want to smile or raise your brows and definitely not laugh. Moving the eyes side to side to can be uncomfortable. Turning over in bed, even when the nose isn’t touched, can hurt as well. Headaches are common and the swelling in the sinuses can cause vertigo. Also, sometimes there is a desire not to turn the neck even if the neck doesn’t hurt. It is also common to hold the arms out when anyone comes close to avoid them touching the nose incidentally.

Lacerations

The injurious impact on the nose can cause a laceration. Hope’s laceration is right where the nasal bones meet with cartilage. Lacerations anywhere on the head, including the nose, bleed a lot. If you put the same cut on the forehead and arm, the one on the forehead will be far bloodier. That blood, as well as the swelling, make it very difficult/impossible to breathe through the nose.

How A Broken Nose Hinders Fighting

During the course of a fight, your character might get their nose broken and not even realize it. But, even if the character has no idea their nose is broken, the injury can impact their fighting in two ways. First, the swelling and blood from the break can lessen nose breathing which lowers oxygen levels. The nose warms, humidifies and filters incoming air and better activates the breathing muscles which allows for better oxygen absorption. This is why nose breathing is linked to better cognitive function, faster reaction time and better spatial task performance. The brain simply has more oxygen to work with so it works better.

Secondly, the blood from the break doesn’t only flow out of the nose. It also flows down the throat and can be swallowed. This can cause coughing and stomach upset. If through the mouth is the only way a fighter can breathe and they are coughing, their performance will not be at its best. That is not to say the fighter cannot continue fighting. They can and do all the time.

A broken nose can also hinder future fights. Whenever the septum in the nose, the wall that separates the nostrils, is moved from its original place, breathing can be impacted. This is especially true at night. If you are writing a scene in which there are seasoned warriors or fighters sleeping, write plenty of snoring. 

When we snore, we are not breathing as we should. When we don’t breathe as we should, we don’t get the most oxygen we could be getting as we sleep. This can create more fatigue and impact mental clarity. I cannot stress enough how important sleep is to anyone any time. It is especially important when healing from any injury. Sleep is when the body heals. Lower sleep quality means less efficient healing. Writers … get your sleep!

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After Care for a Broken Nose

Immediately after the injury, if there is bleeding, tilt the head forward so that the blood can run out. Don’t tilt the head back. You can pinch the soft part of the nose as well. Icing the area will also lessen blood flow. I have found that icing under the upper lip helps as well. Nasal plugs, which are tubes of gauze, can be inserted in the first inch of the nose to absorb blood. No matter how wet the sinuses feel, don’t blow the nose. Blowing the nose when it is healing from a break, especially right after the injury, can make the sinuses swell up like donuts around the eyes.

Over the next several days, continue icing several times a day. Keep the head elevated as much as possible. Over the counter pain reliever is fine. Avoid nose spray.

Setting the Nose

No one but a medical professional should attempt to manipulate a broken nose. But your work may not have a medical professional. Also, if the break is subtle, fighters might mess with it to straighten it a bit. I’m guilty of it.

Modern Medicine

This information is courtesy of Fauquler ENT. To correct a broken nose without surgery, a doctor first injects numbing medication to three areas: the cheek, near the inside corner of the eye, and at the base of nose. The inside of the nose and sinuses are then sprayed with a numbing solution.

The doctor places a blunt edged device in the nose to gently press the bones back in place. After, the nose may be packed with gauze to keep to give it stability. The packing may be kept in place about a week. An external splint is also placed on the bridge.

The Wrong Way

The worst thing to do to a broken nose is press on the outside. Even though pressing the outside of the nose may improve the external shape, it could make the internal structure worse. But, like I said earlier, people do it all the time, and your character might. If your character does attempt to manipulate their own nose, they might hear crunchy sounds, and the pain is remarkable!  

Why You Might Want to Break Your Characters Nose

A broken nose is a common injury most can imagine regardless of fight experience. The subsequent bruising around the eyes and the stuffy sinuses are also easy to describe and for a reader to envision. And, a misshapen nose is something most readers have seen as well.

Broken noses are also very visible, as plain as the nose on your face! Any time you want characters to know another character has been injured, put that injury on the face. Also, any time you don’t want a character to forget a fight, injure their face. Every time your character looks in the mirror, they can be reminded of the altercation that altered their appearance. You can adjust the injury to match the level of scarring or facial distortion your work needs.

Maybe the Best Reason of All

Broken noses get a reaction out of people. Folks wince when they see a broken nose. They suck in air through their teeth and groan. Some can’t even bear to look at it. Those visceral responses are the result of activated mirror neurons.

Mirror neurons allow us to experience what we see. We may not feel the pain of the broken nose on someone else’s face, but, thanks to mirror neurons, the parts of our brain that process pain are firing as if we are the ones hurting. And sometimes, seeing someone else in pain causes our own bodies to literally respond in kind. Have you ever hurt while looking at an injury on someone else? Yep, that’s the mirror neurons.

Any time you can impact your reader on a cellular level, be it emotionally or physically, you win. You have officially brought the reader into the story. And, a reader who is a part of the story is less likely to leave it. So, as wrong as it sounds, punch your reader in the face! They will love you for it.

I hope that helps you with your next fight scene and the subsequent injuries. To get a better look at the injuries I described, head over to FightWrite.net. And until the next time with FightWrite on the WD blog, get some blood on your pages!

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(Writing Two-Sword Style Fighting (FightWrite))

Carrying a Sword  

Before we get into the ins and outs of carrying a sword on the back, let’s consider carrying a sword in general. There are three things that impact where we carry any weapon: convenience, custom, count. Each of these can determine not only where a weapon might be carried but how it is carried in a particular location.

Convenience

In order to protect yourself with a weapon, you have to be able to access that weapon easily. The weapon also must be positioned in a way that allows for its proper use. Here is what I mean.

If your character carries gun as their primary form of protection, they wouldn’t want to keep that gun on their leg under their pants*. Why? Well, when a bad guy jumps out, your character would have to fight off the villain, lean down, hitch up their pant leg, unsnap the gun from the holster, then draw it. Unless the villain allows the hero to call time-out, that villain will not allow the hero to grab that gun.

That is why every professional who carries a gun as part of their job keeps the weapon on their chest, hip, or, sometimes, lower back, if the weapon must be more concealed. These people have to be able to access their weapon easily and each of those locations allow for that. And, in all cases, they will carry the gun with the handle toward the wielding hand in a way that allows for a natural grip.

The same can be said of swords. They were carried in a place that allowed for a convenient, smooth wield. Sometimes that was the side, sometimes that was the back. In some cases, it was straight across the belly. In all places, the handle was easily accessible and positioned for a functional grip.

Custom

Though weapons were created for protection, custom could dictate where they were/are carried. Historically, left-handed folks were not lauded. In several languages, words meaning sinister, stingy, and just plain wrong-sided are derived from that language’s word for left. In the time of swords, if you were left-handed, you learned to function right-handed and you kept your “southpawness” a secret.

The common cultural practice of functioning right-handed is why swords were often carried on the left hip. Does that mean swords were always wielded with the right hand? No. The French created a parrying sword specifically for the left hand. It was meant to be used in tandem with a sword in the right hand. The name of that sword was main gauche – the French term for left-handed. Main gauche also means “unsophisticated hand.” (See what I mean? Southpaws, historically, didn’t get no respect!) If your work is historical and there are swords, research the use of the left hand in wielding.

You also should research when a sword was carried edge up or down. The blade is the metal portion of a sword or knife. The edge is the sharpened portion of the blade. Certain dress could dictate the direction of the edge. And the angle the wearer positioned the entire blade when passing others could be impacted by their social ranking. If you are high status, you might not point your sheathed sword down when you passed others. It would be everyone else’s job to concede to your rank and get out of your way.  

Count

The number of weapons carried also determines where each is located. *Remember when we looked at how inconvenient it is to have a gun on the leg? That only applies when that gun is the primary weapon. If the gun is a secondary or tertiary weapon, being on the leg is fine. The idea is that the gun on the leg will be used when the most accessible weapon isn’t available or functional. 

Historically, edged weapons on the body were a bit like mice: If you saw one, there were bound to be more. Swords were not the best weapon for every task. Sometimes a knife or sword of different length was needed. Also, swords could be broken or dropped. In those cases, the warrior needed a back-up weapon. And, sometimes, that back-up weapon might have been on their back.

Carrying the Sword on the Back: Appropriate

Now that we know about what impacts where swords were carried, let’s look at when swords were carried on the back. Any time a warrior found the back to the be the most convenient place for their sword, that’s where they carried it. If the sword was especially long or if the warrior would be climbing and moving a lot, carrying the sword on the back might have made the most sense.

Carrying the Sword on the Back: Not Appropriate

Running Out of Arm

Looking back at our two original characters in question, Deadpool and Michonne, the placement of their primary weapons wasn’t ideal. But far greater a sin than where they carried their weapons was how they did so. Each character carries their swords in a scabbard. That is the first problem we will look at.

A scabbard is meant to cover the entire blade of a sword. The length of a katana, which both characters carry, can be anywhere from 24–31 inches. When you draw a sword from a scabbard, you often hold the scabbard in place then pull the sword by the handle separating the two from each other. (By the way, scabbards and sheaths are the same thing. Scabbard is the word generally associated with longer blades like swords.)

Now imagine the scabbard is on your back. You reach back with your left hand and hold the sheath in place so it doesn’t ride up when you pull the sword. You reach up with your right hand for the handle which would be around five or more inches up from the blade. So, even if the blade is on the short side, say 24”, your hand will be around 29” from the tip. When you pull up on the katana, it is highly likely some of the blade will still be sheathed even at the greatest length of your reach. Yes, you will pull down on the sheath. But the way the scabbard is affixed to your back can’t be very mobile or the weight of the weapon will pull the whole thing down, out of your reach.

Put a tape measure at the base of your neck on your back. The scabbard would actually be lower, but let’s make it easy. Pull up on the tape measure with your hand sideways, as if holding the handle of a sword that is pointing down. Your reach won’t be as long as you think. If you are drawing sideways toward the edge of the shoulder, the reach is even shorter.

I have looked at Michonne’s sheath and the length of her weapon. Even standing at 5’7”, ain’t no way she is clearing that sword from the scabbard. If you can find an episode that shows her from the back wielding the weapon, reach out to me. I gotta see that for myself.

If you want your character to carry their primary sword on their back, it would be best to have the sword in a break-away scabbard. This type of scabbard grips the blade on one side and is open on the other side. This means the wielder doesn’t have to clear the length of the scabbard. Unfortunately, break-away scabbards aren’t viable for every type of sword.

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Behold, All My Vital Organs

One of the biggest issues with carrying the primary sword on the back is what the drawing of it leaves exposed. When I reach my right hand to my left hip, I provide a small barrier to my vital organs. When I reach back over my shoulder for my weapon, I am exposing all of them: heart, lungs, guts, liver, all the things. That is a problem even if I am in armor. Armor is not impenetrable. Even if it is, in the time it takes you to pull your sword I could push kick you in the chest or whack you with a war hammer.

Why Do We See Swords on the Back on Screen?

So, if carrying a sword on the back is so fraught with peril, why do we see it so much on screen?

I reached out to my good friend and edged-weapons expert, Kirk McCune, for this question. Ready for the answer? Ladies and gentleman, here is why we so often see swords wielded from the back on screen: It looks super cool. Seriously, it is dynamic and dramatic. Movies and TV shows are, after all, entertainment.

And there you have it. Why your character might not want to carry a sword on the back. Can they? Sure. Should they? Maybe. The most important thing about where your character carries their weapon is your knowledge about that placement. By the way, in my Writer’s Digest book, Fight Write, I talk about why swords look the way they do. And they do look a certain way for a reason. In Fight Write, Round Two, my friend Kirk wrote several chapters on how to hold a sword and how to write the training of sword work. Give both of those books a gander.

Until the next round with FightWrite on the WD blog, get blood on your pages. And, hey! Reach out to me via the contact form on FightWrite.net and give me some post ideas. The best thing for me to write about is the thing you need to know.

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Is the Two-Sword Style a Thing?

I am asked about the two-sword style at almost every writer’s conference. The first thing I am often asked is simply: Is it a thing?  We see it in movies/TV shows such as “The Walking Dead”, John Wick 4, Deadpool, and Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon. Are those directors and screenwriters drawing from history or simply giving viewers a cliché they so love? And, yes, viewers love the two-sword style. I know that because writers seem to gravitate toward it like moths to porch lights.

The two-sword style is a thing. In fact, some weapons, such as butterfly swords, were made specifically for such a fighting style. Two-sword styles span across cultures and continents. That said, it wasn’t the most common manner of using edged weapons, and there is a good reason for that.

Edged Weaponry

An edge is the sharp portion of a blade. A blade may have one edge or two. Steak knives have a blade with one edge. Daggers have a blade with two edges. Any weapon with an edge is an edged weapon.

It’s important to understand what edged weaponry is because what many consider a two-sword style is actually a style of two, edged weapons, only one of which might be a sword. Many times, the second weapon is a type of knife. If you have ever taken any of my classes or read my books, you will hear me say that where there is a sword, there is a knife. There is a reason for that.

Swords are excellent weapons but not all-encompassing. In order to be deadly, a sword has to have movement to slash or stab. For movement, there has to be ample space. If two combatants are in close quarters, there may not be enough room for either to use their sword effectively even with a reverse grip. That’s where the knife comes into play. Even if your character does wield two swords, they will also carry a knife as a tertiary weapon.

Primary, Secondary and the Horrible Left Hand

Before jumping into wielding two, edged weapons together, we have to understand the concept of a primary and secondary weapon. A primary weapon is generally the weapon wielded in the dominant hand. It is considered the primary weapon because of the greater dexterity in the dominant hand. It may also be considered primary because of its lethality. That said, the more lethal the weapon, the more one would want to carry it in the hand over which one has the most control.

Ambidexterity

There are people who use each hand with the same ease and control. These people are rare and incredibly gifted when it comes to fighting of any kind. However, historically, ambidextrous people wielded the primary weapon in the right hand as left-handedness was not celebrated — to put it mildly.

In Europe, where many sword-centric fantasy works are set, the languages tell the story of how being left-handed was once perceived. In French, Spanish, and Italian, the words for left and left-handed, can still be synonymous with clumsy, sinister and underhanded. In German, the word for left can be used to say, on the wrong side. In Asia, Africa, and the Middle East, the attitude was once much the same. So, even if your character is ambidextrous, their primary weapon will likely be in the right hand.

Requirements for Wielding Two, Edged Weapons

In order to wield two, edged weapons at the same time, each weapon has to meet a few requirements. One, each weapon must have a weight distribution and balance that allows it to be wielded with only one hand. Some edged weapons, such as a broad sword, required two hands to wield because of its weight. That would make wielding a secondary weapon impossible.

Two, each edged weapon must have a design that compliments the other. If one weapon is very forward heavy, like a battle axe, it might be difficult to wield with another weapon. Also, if the primary weapon is a melee weapon, such as an axe, hammer, or club, it is often wielded with a shield which prohibits the use of a secondary blade.

Three, the weapon must have a handle that allows it to be wielded with the desired hand. Some edged weapons have a hand guard that is only suited for one hand. Usually that hand is the right hand. To have an edged weapon with a hand guard that is side specific for the left hand, a weapon might have to be specially made. That is expensive.

Issues Associated with Wielding Two, Edged Weapons

Wielding two, edged weapons was absolutely doable. I have been introduced to one such style in Filipino Martial Arts. That begs the question: Why didn’t more people wield two? If one knife is good, shouldn’t two be even gooder? Yes and no.

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The Benefits

The benefits of a two-sword style begin before the swords are even put to use: It is intimidating. Dealing with two moving blades is highly perilous, and the possibility is enough to make many would-be attackers stand down. Another benefit is the most obvious. The wielder has twice the edges. Also, if the weapons are of differing lengths, the wielder can easily transition to in-fighting (close quarters) without having to grab the secondary blade.

The Detriments

When fighting with edged weaponry, the open hand is very important even though it does not hold a weapon. It’s used for balance, parrying, grabbing, punching, getting up from the ground, and holding a shield. With a weapon in hand, some of those actions are more difficult or impossible.

When both hands hold a weapon, the wielder is in more danger. The combatant has to be mindful not to stab or slash their own darn self. They have to have an efficient way to carry and draw multiple weapons and still carry a knife. The wielder must also have the means to maintain all the weapons.

The Biggest Issue

The most difficult part of a character wielding two, edged weapons is not you, the writer, understanding how the character would use those weapons. It is also not showing the reader why that style is culturally appropriate or practical for the character. The hardest part of having our character wield two, edged weapons is writing it. Writing sword work for one sword can be difficult. Writing movement for two swords can be more challenging.

If you are a writer who excels in writing sword or knifework, writing two swords may present no challenge for you. Even so, consider why you have chosen two swords. Consider where the character is geographically and physically located and if them having two swords makes sense. Consider how they will carry the two swords. And, if your chosen area of carry is in sheaths on the back a lá Deadpool or Michonne from “The Walking Dead”, stop. You do not understand enough about wielding two swords to write it. Why? Well, that will be our next post!

Until the next round with FightWrite on the WD Blog, get blood on your pages.

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(How Criminal Sketch Artistry Works (FightWrite))

Most Predictive Cues to Assault

PATC Legal & Liability Risk Management Institute conducted a study on interpersonal cues predicting assault. A sample of 129 law enforcement officers, all assaulted at least once on the job, chose 11 behaviors that signaled attack. They are listed from least to most predicative.

11. Stretching arms / shoulders
10. Sweating profusely
9. Pacing
8. Tense jaw muscles
7. Head rolls / neck stretches
6. Looking around the area
5. Making verbal threats
4. Clenching hands into fists
3. Placing hands in pockets (Hiding hands)
2. Invading personal space
1. Assuming a fighter’s stance

 The Fighter’s Stance

The fighter’s stance is an important body posture to know not only for your work but your life off the page. In general, a fighter’s stance puts one foot forward, as if stepping, and the hands are brought up away from the body. The chest tends to be toward the opponent.

Blading

If the chest is turned slightly away, and the entire body is turned slightly sideways, that is known as “blading.” While it wasn’t in the top 11 listed by law enforcement officers, it’s a big one. Generally, blading is a type of fighter’s stance. However, a bladed fight stance has different implications than one in which the chest directly forward.

One Purpose of Blading

One purpose of body blading is to create less of target for the opponent. To better understand blading, grab a book and set it on a table in front of you with the front of the book facing you. It can be turned a little, but not much. You shouldn’t be able to see enough of the spine to read it, or see the entire width of the pages. That book is positioned in a chest forward fight stance. If it is turned no more than 45 degrees, it is able to throw a good punch. It means business. Don’t take your eyes off that book.

If the book is turned so much that you can read the spine clearly or know the width of the pages, that book is bladed. Notice that in that bladed position that book is a smaller target. That is why some people adopt the bladed stance in a fight. They are offering a smaller target for the opponent. That said, that is not the most efficient body position for punching. So, if your character has adopted that stance, they either don’t understand the mechanics of an efficient punch or they are a practitioner of a martial art that utilizes that stance for a reason that directly relates to the efficiency of that style. For example, Taekwondo utilizes a bladed stance. That stance relates directly to the movement of Taekwondo.

The Deadlier Purpose of Blading

There is one more reason that a character might adopt a bladed stance, and it the biggest problem for the opposing character. People blade their body in an attempt to obscure something from the person facing them. That something is often a weapon. Look back at that feisty book on the table. If you can see the pages completely, you can’t see a word on the spine. That book could be holding a knife on its spine side and you’d be none the wiser.

On that note, let’s say that book is in a bookstore and it has black plastic covering half of the book. One side of the book is visible. One side is obscured. Before you buy that book, you will want to know why a portion of it is covered. What does the store not want you to see? What is being hidden?

Look at your characters the same way. If a character is hiding a portion of their body, there is a problem. What does that character not want others to see? What are they hiding? It could be a weapon.

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Is It Cold or Criminal?

But let’s say it is cold out. Two characters are arguing and one has a hand in the front pocket of their hoodie. How can you show the reader the difference in a character who is trying to stay warm and one who is concealing something? Show the rest of the body. If the character is cold, the rest of their body will show it. They will use one hand to gesture, then replace that hand in the hooding pouch to warm it. If both hands are in the pocket, the elbows and shoulders will still be moving.

Spot the Difference

However, if that character’s body is moving, but the arm of the hand that is hidden is dead still, there is a problem. That character is not moving that hand and arm because the want to keep a grip on the weapon. Or, maybe they think that if they keep the arm and hand still it will draw less attention. They think others will be so distracted by the movement in most of their body, they won’t know notice the stillness in another.

And there you have it. How to show rather than tell that your character means to fight. And, reader, I hope that you can remember this list for yourself as well. We want a realistic fight scene and a story that punches the reader right in the gut. But we have to be healthy enough to write it. Stay safe out there. And be on the lookout for any books that are adopting a fight stance with you! Make eye contact, and keep walking. That book is up to no good.

Hope to see you all at the Writer’s Digest Conference coming up quickly July 24-27. Be sure to check out my classes “Hurting Your Character and Fight Write: Practical to Tactical.” In the first class we will be looking at wounds. Literally. In the second we will learn how to wound! Take both. You won’t regret it.

Until the next round with FightWrite® on the WD blog, get blood on your pages!

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(Is My Killer a Psychopath or a Sociopath? (FightWrite))

Unfortunately, despite its moniker, the lie detector test doesn’t actually test for lies or prove guilt, and it may not even be allowed as evidence in criminal court. In this FightWrite® post, we will take a very honest look at the polygraph. We will look at what it does and doesn’t do and when the results are admissible in court.

Disclaimer

Before reading further: This is not legal advice. I am not a lawyer and I am not your lawyer — I wouldn’t wish that you. Also, we will only consider polygraph results as they relate to criminal trials, not civil trials. Lastly, this post is for informational purposes only. Its intent is to help writers create believable fictional work and make life miserable for their innocent characters or keep a lunatic character on the streets.

What the Polygraph Does

The polygraph measures three physiological responses: heart rate/blood pressure, respiration, and skin conductivity. All increase when the body is emotionally aroused. The idea behind these measurements is that when someone is lying, their body is more excited than it is when they tell the truth. And the polygraph does its job in that respect. It does measure the body’s physiological responses to certain questions.

What the Polygraph Does Not Do

What the polygraph does NOT do is measure deception. It cannot discriminate between physiological responses to lies, the pure stress of being in a situation where a polygraph is required, or menopausal hot flashes. Basically, a polygraph is great at testing to see if someone is uncomfortable. And its margin of error, is anywhere between 15 to 40 percent.

Admissibility in Court

In 31 U.S. states, polygraph results are not allowed as evidence in criminal cases. In five states, results are only admissible when both the prosecutor and defense agree to it. When polygraph results are admissible and incriminate the defendant, the defense can bring in expert witnesses to refute the polygraph results or question the qualifications of the tester. In all states, if inadmissible polygraph results are mentioned at all during the course of a criminal trial, the entire proceedings could be declared a mistrial.

That said, even when polygraph results cannot be used in court, law enforcement can ask suspects if they would agree to take one. The goal of the polygraph in those cases is to measure what questions/statements cause the greatest physical disturbance in the suspect. Those results could be used to steer an investigation. What law enforcement cannot do is compel or coerce anyone to submit to a polygraph.

Types of Polygraph Questions to Expect

         Irrelevant and Relevant

If your character takes a polygraph, there are a few types of questions they may encounter. Irrelevant questions are questions not related to the case. These questions can give a baseline for behavior or help a person relax between relevant questions that might cause anxiety. What is your name? Are you alive right now? Do you have two feet? These are all examples of irrelevant questions. Relevant questions are questions that relate to the case for which the person is taking the polygraph.

         Control

Control questions are questions that relate to a scenario similar to the case. They not are directly related to the case but do tend to lead to questions that are. The best control questions are ones that incriminate just about everyone for something. For example:

• Have you ever driven over the speed limit? (Control)
• Have you ever been angered by another driver? (Control)
• Did you speed and run the victim off of the road? (Question directly related to case)

Control questions like these are used because, in theory, an innocent person wouldn’t have any issue saying they had driven over the speed limit or been angered by another driver. In the mind of the innocent person, who hasn’t done both of those and having done either wouldn’t make them guilty of running someone off of the road. Why would it?

On the other hand, the person guilty of running someone off the road would want to seem as though they had always been a model driver. No. They had not gone over the speed limit even once. No. They had never been angered by another driver.

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         Directed Lie

Sometimes the one taking the polygraph is instructed to lie to certain questions. These questions are known as directed lie questions and they are innocuous and straight-forward. “Are you a duck?” “Did you fly here today with your wings?” Directed lie questions may be asked several times to get a baseline for the person’s physiological response to a lie.

Beating the Polygraph

If you look at websites endorsing polygraph science, they will tell you that you cannot beat a polygraph test. Unfortunately, history doesn’t support that. The Green River Killer, Gary Leon Ridgeway, The Angel of Death killer, Charles Cullen, and kidnapper Richard Ricci all passed a polygraph test. Spies Ignatz Theodor Griebl, Karel Frantisek Koecher, Jiri Pasovsky, Larry Wu-tai Chin, Aldrich Hazen Ames, Nicolás Sirgado, Ana Belen Montes, and Leandro Aragoncillo all passed it as well.

There are many sources out that can coach one to pass a polygraph. Most seem to focus on using the control questions to create a faulty baseline. After all, if your character reacts to everything as if it is a lie, how would a polygraph detect an actual lie? To create an inaccurate baseline, your character can:

• Think excited thoughts and constantly alter their breathing pattern. Holding the breath randomly throughout the test is important.
• Fidget the whole time. Shift in the chair, move the shoulders, cross and uncross the feet, sniff, flutter the eyes … all the fidgety things.
• Have the character randomly bite the side of their tongue or press down on a tack they’ve placed in their shoe. All of these can raise the character’s blood pressure and throw of interpretation of the results.  
• Lastly, and this is toughest one, have your character be deeply calm. This is how all the criminals mentioned in this post passed. This is the toughest route to take, but it is doable.

The efficacy of the polygraph is constantly under debate, yet it remains a constant presence in criminal cases. It is completely plausible that if your character is questioned in connection to a crime, they will be asked to take one. Now, you can write how you want that test to go.

If you want to know more about forensic evidence like the polygraph, questioning techniques or how the human body reacts when we attempt to deceive, check out my book Fight Write, Round Two. It’s full of great crime stuff.

And, speaking of crime, I am teaching and speaking with a panel at ThrillerFest this June. I will also be teaching with my WD family at the Writer’s Digest Annual Conference in July. If you see me at either, please say hello!

Until the next round with FightWrite on the WD Blog, get blood on your pages. And don’t lie about it.

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(Areas of the Body Most Often Impacted by Firearms Injuries (FightWrite))

Psychopath and Sociopath

The terms psychopath and sociopath are interchangeable. The term psychopath first appeared in the late 1800s. It was replaced by the term sociopath in the 1930s. The two were used interchangeably by clinicians with some favoring the latter as psychopathy was often confused with psychosis by laymen.

In 1980, the DSM-3, the third edition of the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual used to diagnose mental health maladies, introduced a broader diagnosis of Personality Disorder that included traits of psychopathy/sociopathy. Today, these traits are found among the 10 diagnosable personality disorders in the DSM-5-TR. Neither psychopathy or sociopathy are a diagnosis. They are a set of personality traits without differentiation and neither word is found in the DSM-5-TR.

So, put away the multitude of info graphics you’ve put on your desktop reminding you of the differences between two terms because clinically, there is no difference. Also, don’t worry, you don’t have to know the intricacies of each of the 10 personality disorders. Instead, consider whether your killer is an organized or disorganized offender.

Organized and Disorganized Offenders

Forensic/criminal psychologists, as well as criminal profilers, have compiled a list of characteristics that distinguish organized from disorganized criminal offenders. The characteristics are gleaned from known killers of both categories and are used as a reference to begin the process of profiling an unknown assailant. That said, the start of a profile is not the final product. Both types of killers can deviate here and there from the compiled characteristics, especially in terms of intellect. And some killers, such as Aileen Wuornos, can fall distinctly between the categories.

Organized Offenders

Personal Characteristics

Organized offenders, such as Ted Bundy, Joel Rifken, and Dennis Rader, tend to be male with a masculine image. Quite often they were raised in a middle-class environment, are of higher birth order, and the victim of childhood abuse1. They tend to have average or above intelligence and are socially adept. They are sexually competent, attractive, and charming. It is not uncommon for them to verbally seduce their targets. They are occupationally and geographically mobile, and may live with a partner. They have a controlled mood during their crime and a controlled demeanor overall. Their crime scene is likely squeaky clean of evidence.

Post-Offense Behavior

To the organized offender, getting caught is a game. They keep up with the news regarding their crime, are police groupies and may call in to offer information about the incident. They are very difficult to catch as they are meticulous at covering their tracks. Also, their crimes tend to have three distinct areas: approach, kill, and disposal. They are known to move the victim’s body several times and dispose of it in a way that advertises the crime.

Disorganized Offender

Personal Characteristics

Disorganized offenders, like Jack the Ripper and Jeffrey Dahmer, tend to be male and victims of childhood trauma such as neglect and physical/sexual abuse3. Often, they are neither socially nor sexually competent and have poor hygiene. Their education level and intellectual ability tend to be low. They generally don’t have stable transportation, so their kills tend to be near where they live. They are anxious during the crime, overwhelm their victims with violence, and tend to leave the body in plain view at the scene. They are also known to leave plenty of evidence behind out of adrenaline-fueled carelessness. That is not to say that they are quickly nor easily caught. Some of the most prolific disorganized offenders evaded capture by more than a decade.

Post Offense Behavior

The disorganized offender may change their address or place of work after the crime1. Both, however, may still be near the scene of the offense as this type of offender likes to revisit where the crime took place. They may keep a diary or clippings related to the crime and attend a memorial for the victim. They may even go so far as to place an “in memoriam” in the local paper.

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What This Means for Your MS

How can this help you in writing your manuscript? Placing your character into one of the two killer categories will save you time in creating a backstory. You know that if your killer is calculated with their crime, they could have had a solidly middle-class upbringing and were voted Most Charming in high school.

You could also use the character traits to give more details to your killer. If their crime is frenetic and poorly planned, its reasonable that their clothes are often dirty and they have body odor. Little additions like that can bring a character to life in a way their behavior can’t.

A Killer Reference Tool

There are enough well-researched and verified traits of organized and disorganized killers to fill a small but creepy library. I found nearly 1,000 books on criminal profiling with little effort. The traits I’ve listed barely scratch the surface but are hopefully enough to help you get on the right path of character killing. In my book, Fight Write, Round Two, I have infographics that give these characteristics, and more such as the type of criminal interview that is best for each type of offender. For example, if your character is a disorganized killer, your police characters will want to bring them for questioning at night.

I hope this was helpful and saves you time in creating your characters. The more time you save in one aspect of your work, the more you are afforded in others. If you write mystery or thriller, check out the table of contents of Fight Write, Round Two. There’s an entire section just for you. You’ll learn how to diagram a crime scene, which personality disorder your character might have, and why during criminal interviews police often carry in a file folder thick with papers. Writer’s Digest gives the book a thumbs up. And don’t forget that the FightWrite blog is out there for you free of charge and chock full of killer tools to help your scenes of action, violence and crime be the best they can be.

Until the next round with FightWrite on the WD blog, get blood on your pages.

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(Entitled and Uncomfortable (FightWrite))

That’s No Bat

Several years ago, a friend of mine had a confrontation with a man in a parking lot. When he turned to walk away from the argument, his feet came out from under him. He said it felt as though someone had hit his legs with a bat. He had no idea that what felt like a bat was actually a bullet.

After the fact, we talked about how blessed he was to have taken the bullet in the side of the knee. Had the aim been higher, he might not have been alive for us to have the conversation. We wondered at the odds of him being shot in such a small area as the knee or anywhere on the legs. What we didn’t know then was that his injury fit the odds perfectly. Strange as it might seem, the majority of gunshot wounds, both intentional and unintentional, are actually are to the legs.

Areas of the Body Most Likely to be Shot

According to the CDC and National Electronic Injury Surveillance System (NEISS). All of these can also be found on a handy table in the WD book, Fight Write: How to Write Believable Fight Scenes.

Why Not the Biggest Target?

Looking at the graphic above, you can see that the thickest areas of the body are not the ones most frequently injured by bullets. Even combined, the statistics of being shot in the upper and lower trunks are not as high as that of the legs. Why? Legs are smaller targets and especially hard to hit when the body is moving. So, why are bullets finding their way there? There might be a few reasons.

Bullets Fall

Bullet trajectory is parabolic not straight. It raises above then falls below line of sight in an arc. Within .2 seconds, or at about 70 yards away, a 9mm bullet can drop more than four inches in the best of conditions.

Now, if you are a gun person you know that’s a broad generalization because the type of gun matters. The point remains: Bullets drop. Perhaps that’s one reason why so many folks are shot in the legs. The assailant is far enough away that the bullet is dropping below their desired target.

Maybe. But I think there’s better reasons.

Pulling a Trigger is Easy, Hitting a Target is Hard

To me, a more plausible reason people are shot most often in the legs might be because hitting a target is harder than it looks. Pulling a trigger is easy. Hitting a target? Not so much. The faster anything travels, the easier it is to take it off course. In the case of a bullet, the tiniest of movement greatly impacts aim. How you hold a gun can be the difference in a hit and a miss. Grab the handle too tight and your hand will shake. Grip too loose and the gun will shift in your hand. Both impact aim.

Poor hand position on the grip can cause the barrel of the gun to point down slightly. Aim the handgun sideways, a favorite in movies for reasons I do not know, and you lose the front sight—the little fin on the top on the barrel that helps you aim. That sideways position also causes the hand to curve which impacts aim.

I’m not an expert on felonious behavior, but I’m willing to bet that the majority of those who assail with handguns don’t take extra care with grip or aim. I’m also willing to bet they don’t account for weather conditions. That all makes for a bad shot. Add that to the bullet drop over distance and you have the makings of missing a target.

People Don’t Really Want to Kill Folks

In my mind, what has the greatest impact on legs being the most common target is that when people aim to kill, they aren’t literally aiming to kill. Killing isn’t as easy as criminal statistics make it seem. Most people have to be primed to kill. It is estimated that in WWII only 20 percent of soldiers actually fired on the enemy.

By the time the U.S. entered the Korean War, the military had taken efforts to mentally prepare soldiers to fire on combatants. This raised the firing percentage to estimated 55 percent. That is still a low number considering these soldiers were in a position where firing was not only acceptable but expected.

Now consider how likely a regular person is to shoot someone. It is easy to find statistics on how many people are killed by firearms. What is harder to find is the number of people who actually fired those weapons. We can’t assume that every single person killed by gunfire was killed by a different person. So, the number of assailants is likely fewer than the victims, especially since more than 60 percent of violent offenders tend to reoffend. Regardless, the number of people who kill with a gun in the U.S. is a very low percentage of the population. That low percentage may purposely be aiming low to not kill their target.

As far as accidental injuries to the legs, that is likely explained by where a person holsters their gun. If the gun is on the side or hip, it would fire down the body. If the gun is in the hand while walking, for whatever reason, it might be held downward for “safety.” (Straight down by the leg ain’t the safest way to hold a loaded gun.)

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Mortality and Wound Location

Any bullet wound to any area of the body can kill. When a bullet enters the body, it carries with it all the cooties it went through in flight. It also pulls in clothing from the body and bacteria on the skin.

Infection aside, there are some bullet wounds that are especially difficult to survive, and we need to bear that in mind when we write a bullet into our characters. Even with modern medical care readily available, only about 30 percent of people shot in the head survive long enough to make it to the hospital. 50 percent of those die after being admitted to the E.R. Of those who do survive the horror of a gunshot wound to the head, roughly half often suffer recurrent seizures.

Mortality rates of patients wounded in the chest can vary 14 – 36 percent. The chest is a big area. Abdominal injuries have a little more than a 10 percent mortality rate. Those shot in lower extremities have about an 8 percent chance of death. Bullet injuries to the arms and hands are seldom fatal.

Strangely, more bullet wounds don’t equal greater chance of death, which make zero sense to me. According the CDC, the number of gunshot wounds does not predict severity of injury or mortality. The location of each wound has a greater impact than the number of wounds.

A Parting Shot

If the statistics regarding where people are injured by bullets doesn’t hit the target in your work, rest easy. Our readers aren’t looking for authenticity as much as realism. Consider authenticity a means of support for the reality you write, not a standard by which you must write. Knowing where people are actually injured by bullets gives you an authentic way to create and troubleshoot your scenes with firearm injuries.

Until the next round with FightWrite® on the WD blog, get blood on your pages. 

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(How to Punch (FightWrite))

OK, not a miracle. That’s a stretch. But it is a surprise and, bonus, it costs you nothing but a few minutes of reading time. It’s a handy fight scene helper that consists of questions that can help you through your fight scene. The questions are meant to get your creative wheels turning not as any sort of standard by which you should create. There is no one way to create a fight scene, which is part of why it can be challenging. When there’s one million ways to do things, it can be hard to decide any way at all.

That’s where this helper is quite helpful. If you find yourself stuck in the midst of a million options, refer to these questions. Some may lead you to the answer you need simply by giving you a new perspective. This guide, and all the information that can help you make the most of it, is in my book Fight Write, Round Two.

Foundation: Why, Where, Who

Why is the fight happening?

• What is at stake?
• Does the speed and intensity match the stakes?

Where is the…

• Time: Consider the technology, customs and culture
• Geographically: Again, consider technology, customs, culture and the weather
• Site: Where are the weapons of opportunity and the buffers?

Find weapons of opportunity with a thought map. Draw a circle. Put the name of the location in its center. Draw lines from the circle and connect them to anything that is in the area. Draw a line from each of those items and note if and how they could be useful to the scene.

• What sensory details can be added to the scene that show rather than tell about the setting/site? For example, the creak of wood, the squeak of wheels, the smell of horse manure, and seeing the world through a tarp tunnel could be associated with a covered wagon.

Who…

• Your Character: Do you have a fighting style or weapon in mind for your character? Does it fit: the time period? The character’s size? The character’s natural ability?

• Your Reader: Remember to avoid technical language as much as possible. Include details to which the reader can relate such as weight or feel of the weapon. Lean harder on sensory details than technical movement.

Finding An Injury

Disregarding injury, what HAS to happen in the fight scene to support or compel the story forward?

• Does a character need to feel fear? Does an innocent character need to be framed? Does a kingdom need to be in jeopardy? Does a character need to see their own strengths or weakness?
• What is the injury goal?
• Does that injury goal support what HAS to happen in the scene? Does it need to be a certain injury or certain outcome?
• Does it need to be a visible injury?

Yes—consider a wound to the face.

• Does a part of the body need to be spared? Does it need create a scar?

Yes—consider a burn, cut or laceration.

• Does it need to create lasting physical effects? Will those effects inhibit what the character needs to do later in the story?
• Does there need to be dialogue?
• Does the injury you want allow for the dialogue you need?
• Does a character need to die?
• Does the death need to be fast or slow?
• Is the manner of death bloody?
• Is the manner of death appropriate for the target audience?
• Does the speed of death allow for the amount of dialogue that you want?
• Does the speed of death allow for whatever other movement that character needs to do in the scene.
• Does the injury need to leave evidence?
• What type of evidence? Physical? List three options. Circumstantial? List three options.

Blocking

What at the site of the fight that could be used as a weapon or buffer? Consider making a thought map of the area.

• What is the character wearing?
• Does what they have on inhibit their movement? For example, A robe may not allow kicking. A corset may not allow much of any kind of movement.
• Will the character be able to accomplish the injury goal with what they have on
• Considering the clothing worn, where is the character physically vulnerable? For example: If they have on armor, they are not vulnerable where there is metal. But they are vulnerable through the breaths in the helmet, under the arms, at the groin and maybe the neck. Which of those places can be reached with the least amount of effort?
• Which of those vulnerable places is the easiest to access?
• What weapon could access that vulnerable area?
• How would a character have to move to access the target area?
• Write down three movements that could access the area. Don’t write a chain of movements. Just one such as a punch, grab, push.
• Write a single move that would lead to each. For example: A step could lead to any of these. Write a move that could lead to that step. Keep going backward from those movements.
• Pick the movement sequence that is easiest to write.
• What sensory details could be associated with the fight you’ve chosen?

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Pacing

• Jot down the sequence of actions and any other ideas you may have for the scene. Between every two or three pieces of action, place an X to mark where a break in the action can be placed.
• What sensory details or dialogue could be placed in those breaks? Put yourself in the scene of the fight and do the 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 method from Chapter 9. Ask yourself: what five things can I see, four things can I touch, three things can I hear, two things can I smell and one thing can I taste?
• Do the sensory details align with the scene point of view?

Parting Thoughts

Remember, the better part of writing is process, not product. Read that again. The final product is not the hard part. The hardest part of writing is all the work that happened before the final draft was even in sight. And different portions of your work may require a different process. Until you find your fight writing style, you may need to be more methodical than you are with the other areas of your work. That’s normal. Embrace it.

Also, find a writer whose fight scenes you love and try to copy that style until it becomes your own. Whenever I learn a new fight technique, I imitate my coach. The more I repeat that technique, the more it becomes my own. Though the principles of the technique will remain, the minor details will be tailored to my body and fighting style. It is the same with writing.

Be flexible. If you are struggling to get your character out of a situation in your fight scene, ask yourself if you are the thing standing in the way. Are you focusing on what you have written more than what must be written? What must be written is what the story needs. What the story needs may not include some really great stuff that you have written. Don’t stress. Just because the events you want to happen can’t happen in this particular scene, they can still be used elsewhere.

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Don’t Worry, It Will Get Easy Easier

The more you write fight scenes, the easier and more streamlined your process will be. That is not to say that it will ever be easy. I was asked recently by a lower belt when jiujitsu became easier. I laughed and told the guy that, unfortunately, never. But that was because, fortunately, he would always be getting better. He would, without realizing it, be challenging himself more in proportion to his growth. And, by default, that also means he would be making more mistakes.

It is the same with writing. The better writer you become, the higher your standard for yourself with be. The higher the standard, the more you will challenge yourself. The more you challenge yourself, the more mistakes you will make. And, because of all that, it may feel like you aren’t getting better when, in truth, you are better than you have ever been.

I hope the fight scene helper does, indeed, help you. I hope it coaches you through the bumps and bruises of writing your fight scene. And I hope it encourages you to just keep going.

Have a wonderful holiday season, writers. See you all next year! 

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